Hi everybody ,
I’m new on blenderArtist community !
Sorry for my very bad english ( i’m french guy )
This Project are entiraly made with blender an cycle
I hope you can help me with your critic and your suggestion …
Thanks a lot !
Welcome! Very nice lighting and materials! Are you using displacement map for the towel ? It doesn’t look very “soft” to me as I would expect from a towel. Since it’s very close to the camera I suggest using hair particle system for more realism .If you are already using it make the hair thinner and more dense.
Here is a tutorial
Thanks you ! i using particule system but i have some problem for reduce the length ( i have a value of 0.00005)
thanks for your suggestion
Hi. The materials are litle bit to much bumpy (wood, water, towel). In archiviz is important architecture, not towel. Try to play with composition more 
but when you play with it more, it should be great viz!
Hi,
nice render, lot of work went into it. I agree that there’s too much bump. The first thing that looks off to me is that the building is in the shadow - viewers attention is drawn to the sunlit roof and bright skies. I would disable the shadow object which casts shadow on the main part of the building.
TOm
