The following is an art project I’ve recently taken up.
(Higher resolution version)
There is a short story behind this, which I feel obligated to tell before I ask about what could be improved. Once, maybe two or three years ago, I drew a fairly brief comic book. This comic was called “attack of the ham-hams”. (Original can be seen here: http://www.knoxfarms.com/albums/album08/attack_of_the_ham_hams_old.sized.jpg)
The premise of this comic was a series of fight sequences involving an anthropomorphic, sword-wielding fox character, and a large quantity of “ham hams” from the Japanese TV show, “Hamtoro”. The comic was intended to be ridiculously over-the-top (at which it succeeded). This project is a remake of this comic. After several drafts I’ve arrived on something I feel I can post here.
The most obvious problem that shows up for me is the sloppy-looking logo. Post production should take care of this, though… Any tips for logo making?
An eventual color version is a must, I realize.
And a more specific question: does anyone know how to make a fox-like head appear female? The character is supposed to be female but I haven’t the slightest idea how to make it look like such.
Um… that’s pretty much all I can notice on my own, save for the sloppy-looking buildings in the background.