Ever seen “Avalon”, by the great movie of Mamoru Oshii?? I love it, and a scene of that movie inspired me a new model. You can see an image of that scene here: http://www.avalon-movie.com/index.asp
As you can see it should be completed more, but I got bored and not only. As my pc has not much RAM I need to work linking stuff into the main scene, but blender 2.41 is still bugged with this function so this is another reason I stopped to work with this model.
I was gonna go with “Ooh nice” but once you get me started:
The bottom part is off.
The texture (writings??) are too linear and don’t seem to follow the curve as is visible in the top parts.
Oh yeah:
Ooh nice!
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The design is spectacular! As for composition that’s where it could use some work. Kind of boring just cutting the middle in half like that. Also I think there should be something to either side of the structure. This will create a giant wang if you do not add some birds, and clouds to the sky. The brick texture could wrap around the building better. Some of the front bricks look like they would fall off.