Babylon

A recent peice. I have worked in Blender for a bit over a year now…cant compete with some of the stuff ive seen lately, but feedback is greatly welcomed!

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Wow this is really cool nice job. maybe turn the spec down on the camel?

Very nice indeed. This picture reminds a lot of what I’m writing now. My only issue in the camel is a bit shiny and its texture is a bit flat. Applying a normal map might help. The guy’s pose feels a bit stiff, too. Other than that, it’s perfect.

I feel a bit stiff in Blender as yet. I am in the process of learning Zbrush, and soon I will be able to apply those messes with Blender but its all a process, is it not? I appreciate the feedback, could you be a bit more specific? I used Yafaray to render and touched things up in Photoshop and Corel 11.

Any advise is greatly appreciated!!!

In the material settings for your camel is a specular option. try adjusting it more toward black. It will make the fur look more believable. As for the guys pose it feels like he’s walking stiff-legged. If I was trudging through the desert my shoulders would be a rather relaxed and I’d be leaning towards the top of the hill enough to make the climb up a bit easier. That’s all I can say criticism-wise.

Something I also noticed, but is more of a thing I have with all human models is that the hands don’t see quite right. I notice it in video games, movies (even Avatar), and people’s artwork on BA.

Keep at it. I like how your imagination works.