i modeled ball point pen, tell your suggestion about this modeling and idea.
Here is the 2nd image
Perhaps try a more dynamic camera position? Maybe place it on a desk for better contrast. Right now the gray on grey is kind of boring. Some atmospheric lighting would go a long way too.
If you really wanted suggestions for the model itself, I don’t understand why. It already looks great.
Put a (very) small sphere on the writing tip of the pen. Other than that, I have no modeling crits, it’s a decent model.
When doing preview renders in the future, try putting some basic (grayscale, diffuse-only) materials on the different areas of your model. It’ll provide a bit of contrast when trying to find things wrong with it.
Thanks for your comments Morichalion and Zeekar.
here is my 3rd image
I like to try better render yafaray, Luxrender or cycles.
i render this one using Yafaray, why a white strip bottom of the glass material.