Ball Point Pen

AnandhaRaja · July 25, 2011, 9:07am

hi,
i modeled ball point pen, tell your suggestion about this modeling and idea.

Thanks

AnandhaRaja · July 25, 2011, 9:47am

Here is the 2nd image

Thanks

Zeekar · July 25, 2011, 10:21am

Perhaps try a more dynamic camera position? Maybe place it on a desk for better contrast. Right now the gray on grey is kind of boring. Some atmospheric lighting would go a long way too.

If you really wanted suggestions for the model itself, I don’t understand why. It already looks great.

Morichalion · July 25, 2011, 11:23am

Put a (very) small sphere on the writing tip of the pen. Other than that, I have no modeling crits, it’s a decent model.

When doing preview renders in the future, try putting some basic (grayscale, diffuse-only) materials on the different areas of your model. It’ll provide a bit of contrast when trying to find things wrong with it.

AnandhaRaja · July 25, 2011, 8:15pm

Thanks for your comments Morichalion and Zeekar.

here is my 3rd image

I like to try better render yafaray, Luxrender or cycles.
Thanks

AnandhaRaja · July 25, 2011, 10:09pm

hi,
i render this one using Yafaray, why a white strip bottom of the glass material.

Thanks