just recently decided to make a poster for my friends band here’s the first version 
and the second.
all drawn by hand by me in Photoshop.
I like the second better.
I don’t like the bright red surrounding the letters on the first.
yeah that was my problem with it too. it was just too bright and too hard to concentrate on one thing.
Yeah I like the second one better too. The first one the text is just too much.