like some comment on my first serieus entry…men i start drewling when i see yours…:eek:
In terms of materials, and modelling, it looks very good. I do think the composition could be improved, though, and made to be more interesting, in terms of how the eye is lead. and though it is clearly 3D, due to the composition, it has a bit of a flat feeling. Anyway, it is very good on some levels, but I would work on the spatial composition.
(edit) I apologize if this is too much critiquing for the finished projects section, but I wanted to clarify what I meant about the composition. I have broken the image down into lines. Notice everything is trending toward the horizontal and vertical like a grid. I think this is having a flattening effect on the image.
Never enough critisism…thnx for your reply and will keep your realy good points in mind…