Hey guys figured it was about time I moved one of my projects to focused critiques. Meet Benny, a one time gangster. I honestly need to some feed back now, As of Now I am tweaking the shader, and the background which will be a portrait like setting. I will also be posting some different lighting situations that I feel better enhance the mood. I feel seeing as the idea is set, I figure the WIP part is done, but hey, I am kind of random like that. So anyway, If you feel that this needs to be sent back into WIP then tell me. Original WIP
lit with ONLY one spot light behind it ( testing the shader)
my dog’s name is benny…he’s small and white and fluffy…so the name is kinda ruined for me.
but cool character. the lips are the number one non-convincing thing for me.
you should give him some stubble. like just some simple, weight-paint particles.
Thanks working on the stubble, but I can’t get the particles to look convincing. I did a spin around with a single spot light giving you a rep, of the shader, oh, no SSS, and the bump and spec aren’t mapped, I think what I have achieved with such is pretty cool. Oh and the shader test
I know it’s a test, but is it cause of the bump and spec that he now looks more red?
He looks to red.
EDIT:
It could be my pc, it sometimes make movies look more red, Nvidia messes that up!
Clean teeth with one that’s gold.
Try to get the teeth just as nice as in The Incredibles. I love that movie!! Especially the making of videos, I love the whole DVD!
The Particle System needs render improvements. Also “Simulation” is a phase that you should activate later. First finish the model, then finish the texture, after that try to simulate particles and fake some so you’ll save rendertime.Watch the vertex count. Those also high up the rendertime offcourse. I’m sure you already knew that.
Is this maybe a bug on Benny or a location that needs some rig fixing:
What are those two dots? Overlapped faces?
EDIT: Comment on an old update. The image with the spots behind the ears does look sweet and ugly at the same time. Does it not need to be a bit more red and soft?