Bioshock Needle

Hi guys, I made this eve hypo after being inspired by the epic Bioshock series . I was hoping for some general feedback and suggestions, anything would really go a long way. It took me around three fragmented days to get it this far, and I don’t think a few more would hurt . Here’s the what I got:

superb rendering. lighting is excellent. I’d use a more standard composition, but other than that I think we have a winner here.

Thanks Goldenfrog, I took a look at the composition guides and decided on a slanted one, what do you think? I also fixed the sticker and played around with some creases on the needle holder part.