I would really appreciate some constructive critisism on this project. Both in animation and everything else. I want to add that I am not done. I feel like I am about halfway done, but I am not sure what more to add which is why I am here.
This is my latest animation render
and this is my latest test render.
and as some of you may see so is this a late version of Pwnishers community challenge and I just wanted to try one of them even if a bit late.