your current page set up makes it verry hard to follow, the page header is too big which pushes the image down a long way, so you haft to scroll down to see them, then scroll back up to change the page.
Of all the people I’ve showed this to, you’re the only one to say this.
the commic itself is so big i cannot view the whole page without scrolling, even with fire fox in full screen on a 19" wide-screen(1440900), it takes up 90% of the screen width . note: quite a few people still use 1024768.
I have to scroll down to. Seems like nit picking to me, sorry.
it would be much easier to folow with a page index at one side, or just have a long page like a PDF displayed as continuas
Been thinking of adding that.
your website is very plain, not helped by the bright blue/green background on most of the pages. it would look much better with a uniform background colour across the entire comic.
I see. But then many of the scenes are black themselves.
allot of the images are badly composed, with relativity bright backgrounds, but the characters almost completely black.
not sure what you mean.
quite a few images seem to have the default blue colour as the background
I guess it’s kind of a boring color but what’s he big deal?
the HTML is invalid
Not sure but I think that’s because of your computer. Mine can find the page just fine.
please don’t take this criticism the wrong way, it could be very good, but it needs allot more work
Oh I count on critisim here. Places were I’m the only artist I get raves, but here, everyone either is or thinks they’re an expert, so I’ll get input, not fan service, I’m use to it.