Thanks for all the comments I got about the previous versions, it means a lot to me
Here is a new update
I think I’m going to change the story a bit:
In the background you can now see a city, which is being built in the course of time. Each invention the protagonist makes is being adapted in the city and leads to a thriving society. The third invention I added is already falling apart on the designing table, but is used in the city nonetheless. At last the city is destroyed by this invention going haywire.
Some striking problems with this:
-The last invention is looking more like it’s being built than rather falling apart.
-There is too much going on on the right side of the image.
-(most of all) neither the city nor the inventions are very cleary distinguishable. I think about making a new scene just for the background.
Any further problems, critique, thoughts or other comments are very welcome