I’m still pretty amateur when it comes to 3D modeling, but here’s a recent project of mine.
Here’s the original image:
Anyone have any ideas on how I could have improved the tongue? Because it really sort of bothered me. I don’t like the way it stands out all non-tongue-like.
heh thats pretty cool
on the toungue- I think if you made it a bit thicker, and gave it that groove down the middle like in the screenshot it would seem more tongue-like
cheers
It might also help a bit if the mouth deformes a bit more where the tongue comes out. I mean, a tongue that size could push the side of the mouth back a bit. 
hahahah the mix of the bleooohhhg i was saying in my mind as i opened thread and the picture made me chuckle, cool stuff!
lol, looks great. I like the similarities between the pictue and the render, but i think the club looks a bit out of place.
JCTiger
looks kool! Is that from Commander Keen?
hehe cool commander keen enemy! 
Bat blends in with the background. Change background colour.
Also, improve lighting. Then it’s super duper! 