just finished this, let me know what you think
I’d push the feet out further, when they first contact the ground, it feels like they’re just slamming straight down, rather than swinging further forward.
I think he should lead with his chest. Right now it looks like he’s leading with his belly. Spend a little more time with his front foot up so that the pose can be read and then let it fall just like you’re doing it now.
I agree with mikhal, you can move the feet a little further ahead on the contacts.