Broken iPhone Render

I was recently working through the Blender Guru tutorial of making a broken iphone and i came up with this final render, although i think it could be better, comments and critiscism would be very welcome


Compositer Setup is also shown below:


-penguinmagnet

The only problems I really see are that the glow on the screen is way too overpowering and the vector blur needs more samples. I’d set the samples to around 100-150.

I like the bright glow, it adds to the art feeling, imho, this work is perfect!

ah thanks chk :slight_smile: and thank you gordax, i’ll experiment with it as i’m fairly new to compositing, but i’ve found that it can make or break a render