Business office

Artwork Focused Critiques
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Hi there! Recently I’ve been working on this scene:

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I need some advice to make it look more realistic. The lighting is a city hdr with 3.0 lighting and a sun lamp at 40 power, and under color management I’m using filmic instead of default. Any suggestions/critiques are much appreciated, as I’m pretty bad at interior renders.

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Looking pretty good so far, pretty photo realistic. The things that stand out to me are the monitor needs some details i.e. logo, cable ports. Also the scene looks a little empty, maybe add some more assets or fill the scene more for what you have, and the window frames probably shouldn’t be marble I’ve never seen that before :smile:

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Sorry I’m so late replying, but thank you for your encouraging input. I’ll definitely work on the things you mentioned! :smiley:

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Here’s some improvements, any more suggestions?

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You probably noticed i also changed the back wall to wood from marble, do you think that looks better or worse?

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Hey,
Just stumbled across your image. I like the idea of that hovering table :slight_smile:. The dark window framing is cool. The floor tiling is now too large and I have not seen such a wooden wall before. But what comes to my mind is taking the idea of a dark colored wall and using a kind of retro wallpaper. That makes the table stand out.
Try to switch the table support to the left. The triangular wallboard? - strange to me. Add some more books and stuff onto the boards. The table lamp is quite massive to me. And what about a big green plant that at least reaches into view. Your scene gets rich by organic shapes kind (the one in the corner looks :wink:
Keep it up :+1:

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Thank you for your input, I’ll definitely implement those in my scene! :smiley:

EDIT: it’s actually not floating, the desk bends in an L shape and connects to the wall, but thanks for the idea, I might change it to that!