This is looking very, very good. However, I would have him holding her hand with both of his. I’m looking forward to seeing how this develops. Good luck!
another house in the background might help, as is it doesn’t really get the idea of an earthquake across right now, at least not without the title and description.
I know it’s daylight, but more dramatic lighting might help this out too, as is it feels a little flat.
The dof blurr could use a little tweaking, the amount of area out of focus in the foreground is getting onto the hand.
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add a toy and tweak a little bit``I want to do sth impressible so I change the background and the environment to black and white color, only keep the character’s color```
Wow very good… really feels ‘in the moment…’ Devoid of anything going on around him, all he feels is the grief overwhelming him at point in time as he clutches the one he loved