Caravan story idea

I have been working on this story idea for awhile. Here is a composite turntable. The compositing is done in Blender, renders came from Lightwave as I had too much difficulty with the FBX transfer going smoothly. Waiting for upgrades on Blender 2.8 and LightwaveNext? for better FBX transfers.
Comments and suggestions are always welcome.



[video]http://www.hartworks.net/Caravan/caravan_v1.mp4[/video]