Cartoon Chell! (portal 2)

Hey guys!
Im practising my organic models, so here’s a cartoony style Chell. Hope you like it! :slight_smile:





Please tell me what you think! :slight_smile:

I would love it if someone told me what to improve :slight_smile: (im trying to get better at blender)

Well, she looks like she was squished vertically.
Or maybe that her proportions are more of a midget then a child.
Anyway, it would be way more appealing if you exaggerated the female features/curves. or something…
Or maybe not…
I just don’t know what to suggest…

Look up some references for Chibby anime characters :stuck_out_tongue:
http://i459.photobucket.com/albums/qq311/karmy007/Maya_Tara_Chibi-1.png

Thanks, that is exactly the kind of critiques i was looking for :slight_smile:

Hey, so here is a little thing i drew up (while looking at some of them ‘chibi’ things).



(i know its bad, its my first)

Ok, so if this is better, please tell me so i can start a WIP thread, because i just know i wont be able to do this without help :wink:

EDIT: I dont know exactly if this is alright, since this kind of setup is what i got when i googled ‘chibi’. your example is a lot skinnier and longer, so im not sure xD