Cartoon Style Scene

I Tried to create a kind of cartoon scene, I liked the result, I know I could improve a lot of things but it already took too long, so, I’m calling this finished.
I hope for some critics/suggestions =]


The lighting could be better. Or the composition. There’s a lot of stuff everywhere and it’s not clear what the focus is supposed to be.
The models look good. The biggest thing I would improve on is the transition between the objects and the ground plane. It’s harsh even for a cartoon style.

Thank you for replying! and I agree with you, there is no focus at all and I could achieve a better result with the sand ground, I’m trying to improve my modeling and I noticed that during my projects I’m not focusing at a theme/point or something like that, I’m still bad with textures so that’s why I couldn’t create a better ground… But I’ll keep on trying to improve my skills and create elements with a good focus. Thanks again for the advice!

I think lighting is a definite area of improvement here, but seeing as modelling is where you’re focussed I think you’ve done a great job. Love the soft simple shapes and colours that give it a stop motion miniature feel

@blurredmotion Yeah I think next time I create something I should first get better references, because in situations like this I don’t know the best way to use lighting and things like that. Thanks for replying! :wink:

what did you use to render?

@darkleemar It’s Blender Internal =]