CG.Rex Logo animation

hi. i have never been a good animator, but i decided to start learning it thoroughly. begins with my own logo animation

CG.Rex was the name of choice, for my interest in CG and paleontology. after running through 6 different versions, i finally got something that is… ok, i guess, but there’s still something wrong with it, i’m sure. i wonder if the actual words are too small?

i haven’t include any sound yet cause i have no experience in sound design, except maybe tweaking a few things in Audacity. but i don’t know how to actually make a sound to what i want.

Video is private…

oops, i forgot. you should be able to see it now.