Char: Tomiko Van? Or something

So I am planning on entering this comp here:

But mainly this is so that I can get the hang of UV Mapping… However in the meantime, I need crit on getting the shape of the face to match that in the linked
thread…

Thanks
http://sixmonkeys.basement.net.nz/images/Tomiko1.jpg

Actually that isn’t a very good image, when rendered, the face looks quite chubby (-:

Check OSA in the rendering options and put it on some reasonable ammount to get rid of riggid edges.

kk, It’s not actually rendered - thats just it in 3d view… I can post other angles if you like, but really, I just need something like: nose too big(or small) or whatever. I will finish off the back of the neck rougly soon so it doesn’t look as thin, but yeah, to me it looks totally wrong, but I can’t see the specific things, hence posted here…