Character : Steve

This is a character that I have been working on for some time now. I finally finished rigging him. rendered in yafray with just a hemilight. I am currently trying to do an animation of this scene… we will see how that works out.
http://www.pbase.com/image/20017804/original.jpg
let me know what you think

  • steve

This is a really nice image. The lighting, texture and material work is really well done. Looks natural. My favorite element in the scene “has got to be the shoes.”

As far as a critique goes, I think the scale is off in some aspects of the image. The character’s head and neck are slightly out of proportion to the rest of his body. The chair he is sitting in needs to be a little larger, and the window could be larger and placed higher as well. The only other thing I noticed is the shirt appears a little stiff.

Mind you I cannot model a human or any character as well as you have, as I haven’t tried to model character yet.

Maybe add a texture on the wall, maybe a picture on the wall or curtains on the winodws? Maybe a small table or a tv and remote? Just ideas. Again great work.

how does steve hold that position on the chair? :slight_smile:

looks pretty unconfortable…

the shoes rule!

.b

the head looks nice…very real.but i don’t like the wrinkles in his shirt you should have used real ones for reference.