her nose is too talll, eyes to high up and upper head disproportionately large to keep the eyes in the middle of the head. the outer eyes are also way to upslanted. I’d move the eyes down to about where the midlle of the cheeks are currently, and pull the eyebrows and upper nose down. then tweak the top of the head so that the eyes are roughly halfway up. move the ears down/make em smaller to match the new nose. work on the curve of the lower lip, smooth it out towards the lip edges and make the upper lip overlap the lower slightly. I’d also make the jaw a trifle less masculine.
As to the breasts, they might be a bit too large +square, esp. the lower edge shouldn’t be so square with the shirt draping over it.
an overall crit is that she currently has a cute superfemenine “chubby” body- large breasts, stocky legs, very narrow waist, but her face looks emaciated. It gives the overall a disconcerting impression.
fantastic modelling overall. clothes and boots/accessorys have great detail. please finish.