Well actually, this is more like a small comic book.
i was creating this originally for the blenderart magazine but i’m kind of skeptical on whether that’ll be allowed.
so i post the thing here for your amusement. It’s based out of a few short stories i’m writing and putting on a website (link in the sig).
Too dark, hard to see. I’d suggest more contrast, which will allow it to stay dark but brighten up the scene. Also it’s really hard to read the text. I know I do this everytime on finished works, but critiques should always be around. :\