Comic Strip.

Well actually, this is more like a small comic book.
i was creating this originally for the blenderart magazine but i’m kind of skeptical on whether that’ll be allowed.

so i post the thing here for your amusement. It’s based out of a few short stories i’m writing and putting on a website (link in the sig).

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/21560347/%20N%20comic%201%20Assemblies/Page%201.jpg
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/21560347/%20N%20comic%201%20Assemblies/Page%202.jpg
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/21560347/%20N%20comic%201%20Assemblies/Page%203.jpg

Enjoy! :slight_smile:

Too dark, hard to see. I’d suggest more contrast, which will allow it to stay dark but brighten up the scene. Also it’s really hard to read the text. I know I do this everytime on finished works, but critiques should always be around. :\

Well I tried.