concept car rayo

#1

hello guys. blender newbie here.
i started blender because i wanted to see my sketches come to life. and so after almost 1 yr i have learned enough to create it. so here i present you my first complete car model Rayo (Spanish for lightning).
i would like to improve my renders so want some honest critiques on my work.
TA.

RENDERS

http://s26.postimg.org/4chn2tsrd/rayo_front_new_Copy.jpg

http://s26.postimg.org/4nz3fl97d/xzc.jpg

http://s26.postimg.org/uohzupsyh/rayo_back.jpg

#2

here are the wireframes

http://s26.postimg.org/smhigguzd/rayo_wire_frame.jpg

http://s26.postimg.org/6btnghxp5/rayop_wire_frame_2.jpg

http://s26.postimg.org/qe3bz4nvd/rayo_wire_frame_3.jpg

#3

Overall, it looks great! Needs more gloss in the paint shader, and your wireframes are a little rough in places


Like that, with the jagged bits. Other than that though, the design looks nice. I could see myself driving that machine. Haha!

#4

thanks for the reply Dave. yup the wire frames were a little jagged. but i am still learning so hopefully they will be a little smoother the next time. and as for the paint, i wanted a little matte look on the paint. and again thanks for the reply.