Concept Development, need your help

Hello, I’m learning how to make my own concepts and how to start an entire project using external feedback.

The core idea of this concept is a fight between Android and iOS (classic fight xD) I’m using the rule of thirds for composition and I added the character on the background to try giving the concept a bit more story telling, I don’t know if he’s taking too much of your attention from the foreground elements.

Please let me know, at a glance what looks odd or could be improved, any C&C is highly appreciated! Thank you :slight_smile:

Painted Concept

Rendered block out Concept