Coraline's Pink Palace

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Coraline fanart for one of my favorite movies I watch on repeat all year long.

I want to call this “done” but would really appreciate some honest and blunt critiques. I need fresh eyes telling me what’s wrong. I don’t know how/what to improve without getting some real constructive criticism. Nothing I do feels cohesive and I’m stuck.

Made with DeepPaint addon by Gaku Tada during one of his workshops.
Edit to add: I’ve also entered this piece into a contest and have posted on my Instagram.
Link to Instagram post here: https://www.instagram.com/p/DTZxV98Famw/?utm_source=ig_web_copy_link&igsh=MzRlODBiNWFlZA==

Thank you!

CoralinePinkPalaceSideShot_Week03_NaReeSong
CoralinePinkPalaceSideShot_Week03_NaReeSong1500×1500 2.95 MB

CoralinePinkPalaceFrontShot_Week03_NaReeSong
CoralinePinkPalaceFrontShot_Week03_NaReeSong1500×1500 2.86 MB

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Editing to be moved to Finished Projects just for some more visibility to hopefully get some more eyes for critiques/suggestions.

Here is also a little breakdown video:

Also does anybody have any suggestions for where to host videos? Preferably free (aside from YouTube).

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You’re on the featured row! :+1:

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Thank you so much, Bart! What an honor - this made my weekend :heart:

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I received some really helpful feedback from another community and thought I’d share the update.

Toned down the green grass and added grass meshes, swapped the stars for grease pencil stars and added more detail to the house including swapping out the roof for actual tiles.