Looks very nice. Two issues I can see though: the toilet paper seems too flat. Add a small bump or disp map to it just to give it that toilet paper look. Now it looks more like printing paper on a roll. Also, the area around the toilet where it contacts the floor seems a bit harsh at the moment. It needs a bit more shadow there I think. Otherwise, looks great!
Wow, great render! Just a few crits: The materials all look a bit ‘dull’ they don’t reflect the light very much. In particular I think the toilet would have more spec, as ceramic is quite shiny. I also agreed with Aorus about the toilet paper needing to be thicker too.
-Too well lit for a rest room.
-Flush handle looks ceramic.
-Baseboard tiles usually have built-in cove molding.
-tank and cover corners/edges need to be more rounded (keeps them
from breaking in the kiln and after).
-plunger needs to be deeper.
Low RES. Why? It takes too damn long to “tweak” a Yafray picture. Once I get the correct lighting, then I can Yaff it at high Res and some OSA…
I Have had the FRES up 100% on the previous pictures, so now it is a matter of lighting. Choosing the correct lights. positions, etc…
The flush is plastic (at the dollar store). Just kidding. The chrome took too long on my small previews, so I am waiting for the “Ffinal Overnight” render for any chrome.
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@ Kokirii
What? "Rest Room? This is the bathromm that is actually in my apartment. My real bathroom has no baseboards. My Landlord is a cheap ---- . That plunger was a 5 minute prop. The tank. That thing, again. I subsurfed one too many times on that. Shame on me. I used to be a faithful ceramic student and artist.
All kidding aside.
I agree with all of your crits, and will have improvements. Including textures on the toilet paper, a deodorizer and a Playboy magazine on the tank lid. And I can’t forget the feminine pictures that the wife hangs on the walls.
Reminds me a lot of the ueber cheapo toilet papers they usually have in schools and public toilets. I think sometimes I WOULD prefer printing paper on a roll, hehehe.
Oops! While having several windows open (of the same website) I copied and pasted a “Picture/Link” tag from another forum and somehow didn’t replace my URLs.
I couldn’t remember how to write the tag, that’S I why I copied and pasted it.
That’s looking good. The chrome in the tube looks good, but I think it has to be a bit dirtier in the gear thing (don’t know how it’s called). But this one and the other images are all looking good.
UPDATE:
Bare-Bones project.
The toilet mesh is now improved with better hinges. Included is a Basic Blend file and a YafRay Blend file. Lighting, color, and some texturing customized for both projects. Very simple, nothing elaborate.