Critiques Required - My Project "FORWARD"

Hello everyone. I am requesting critiques on this project, on the textures, lighting, models etc and especially if the point has been communicated.

Summary : This idea was about the hope each morning brings despite the uncertainty and rejections one faces in life. I noticed each morning the sun “wakes up” as though nothing happened and continues its revolution. And so should we.

NB : Although I am only experienced in since Jan 2016, I didn’t see another section for rather “inexperienced” Blender users.