itobasco
(itobasco)
May 12, 2006, 6:05pm
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Here is a picture titled Cubism that I made a couple of years back… I would like some helpful criticism on it, any advice would be great! Thanks in advance.

hobbes
(hobbes)
May 12, 2006, 6:20pm
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Simple, but very nice.
I’m not so sure about the transparency, but I love the colors and the composition is also well done.
Please use more descriptive topic titles, I edited that one for you.
Aligorith
(Aligorith)
May 13, 2006, 12:05am
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A bit too much shadow on the ball. But otherwise, a nice piece.
Aligorith
itobasco
(itobasco)
May 13, 2006, 10:32am
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thanks for the comments guys, i’ll see what i can do
oh, and sorry about that Dittohead, i’ll use more descriptive titles from now on…
noobguy
(noobguy)
May 13, 2006, 4:55pm
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a sugestion is that you could put some sort of wood tex on tghe cubes and some sort of jade or pearl tex on the center sphere
but i think its very good anyway
itobasco
(itobasco)
May 13, 2006, 5:44pm
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hmmm interesting thought noobguy, we’ll have to see how that turns out…