Cute Music Video

I am fairly new to Blender and have asked a few noob questions here (thanks Fligh), so I decided to put up my WIP for your pleasure…well no, for your help!
Here’s the deal, I was looking for something do so I agreed to make a music video for a friend of mine and then jumped in at the deep end as is my wont :wink: . I started designing and storyboarding and learning every aspect of Blender as I went along. So, here what I have so far…
Main Character: (The karate pose is just something I do)
http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t9/finiteMonkeys/KaratePose.jpg
Main Character Close Up:

Female Lead:


The Moon (looking worried):

The Night:

How I want the first shot to look:

And how it might have to look due to computation restrictions…

I am fairly content with the boy and the girl but the detail is all lost on the Night. Also I’m having trouble designing ‘The Wind’ and ‘The Day’…Pretty abstract characters, huh?

Any help you can offer would be appreciated. Thanks.