Hello there,
I’ve been working on a Cyberpunk 2077 Inspired vehicle, What do you think I can improve with it?
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Well that’s pretty cool !
The only thing that bugs me is the wheels that are quite clean compared to everything else,
Having a special pass on dirt and wear on the whole car just to balance everything can be a nice little addition.
Also it can be cool to get rid of the black background for presentation, maybe do a quick model of a tunnel ?
And for the model of the car in itself, I think it’s pretty cool, it’s always possible to improve stuff by adding a few elements, like if that car was carrying something in the back , what could it be ? what it would say about the people who own the car and the universe they live in ?
Adding little story / design elements can help to add more interest to the model and the image, but since it’s already quite cool I’m not sure I’d bother with that !
Congrats !
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Nice. Well, you need more unnecessary hi-tech details 
and some crazy paint job.
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Building off of the clean wheels, I would rotate one of them so they don’t line up, since it is unlikely they ever would on a real car.
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cool looking car… I’m learning but not that good as yet…
Made a few changes, fixed the shininess of the wheels and also added more dust and stuff to the windows, (thanks! @sozap)
@scifi_worlds as for the rotation of the wheels, I’m still not sure if these will be true rims, or covers that’ll stay in place as the car drives, I’ll figure that out when it comes to rigging.
I will be working on an environment for this, as well as some characters as i’d like to enter into the endless engines render challenge.
Thanks for all the feedback!
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Great it’s definitively better !
I see that the blue paint doesn’t quite look like a usual car paint material (rough metallic with clearcoat on top), but rather like the kind of painted metal found on heavy machinery such as excavators. Also, the depth of the scratches makes it look like the metal is super thick, almost like an armored car.
These choices do work, but I must ask: are they are intentional?
Also, be careful not to have too much lens distortion and depth of field. When these camera effects are strong, it can make an image look like a miniature.
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give the paint job a blue and redish mix fresnel add some alienated tech details on the body, also yellowish volume lighting behind the vehicle
