Daisy flower (two images)

Constructive but though critique very much appreciated :slight_smile: Blender 2.56, internal render.



Excellent!

I am curious as to how you made the petals. Are they 2D objects or do they have depth?

Looks very nice to me, but I think it definitely needs a different background :wink:

All is modeled (with depth) and textures are procedural only (except the little leaves).


Oh, definitely - I’ll be working on that next.

wow that are many vertices and faces. i like to know how long your rendertime was?

About 3 minutes on laptop with Ubuntu 64bit installed on a pendrive :slight_smile: no kidding…

Wow good job, I love the attention to detail! There’s even tiny pollen grains on the petals!

Thank you! I’ll show you also the version with a background - just need to finish. I’m total amateur so your comments make me feel really well :):):slight_smile:

What do you think now? Anyone looks better? Thanks!



The one on the right is definitely less distracting. This in only my opinion, but all the grass should have some DoF and the daisies should be more central… I only say that because right now the image looks like it has no real focus. Imagine this being a real photograph, viewing it might cause you to wonder about the importance of the grass being in focus AND centered in the frame (one or the other would probably be just fine). Really you should be focusing on the flowers you spend your effort on. :smiley: draw our eyes to them without the lens flare.

Very nice detail work on the flowers, btw. I really don’t want to make it seem like I’m only being critical. You’ve done a great job compositing and lighting. Thanks for posting your work :slight_smile:

Great job with background! Those look very real!

I think you can also try to render a version focusing more on flowers because they are very detailed and I think it will look good :slight_smile:

Once again good job! :wink:

Thanks for great hints! Now, when I’m looking at it I definitely think the grass should not be as exposed as the flowers are - will try to handle it somehow or change the background.

dmancrosse - you are critical and I WANT you to be :slight_smile: There’s nothing better to get some honest thoughts from others! THANK YOU.

any better now you think?


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The left side version is excellent. Great detail work on the daisies.

Thank you!