dark Ages


(blengine_ol) #1

i spent alot of time this week creating these 3 new pics… i popped them in a new gallery called the dark ages… my goal, as of yesterday =), now is to make a death and resurrection/escape scene of the main character, unnamed, he is the one being crucified… huge religious similarites if u know anything of easter or jesus… but the escape part is not written in any bible =) the main char will wiz trough a jungle, meet up with shilia, and i dunno the rest =-)) tell me what u think of my cast so far?

http://spevack.net/blengine/gallery5.html

and ive totalled my old site for a new style, tell me what u think…
http://spevack.net/blengine

thanks alot

chris


(theeth) #2

I’m sorry if I will that will sound like critism, but I just though I should point out the things that I disliked about your two pics (well, pointing out the things that I like would be too long :wink: )

first, in the crucifiction scene:

  • the skin looks a bit plastic IMHO
  • he should have a more expressive face. I mean, he’s getting nailed to two pieces of wood, he should be in real pain
  • the ring seems like it’s reflecting blood, which it shouldn’t

second, the jungle scene:

  • the background pic is a bit too blurry and that makes it look fake
  • her shoudler bones stick out too much IMHO

and that’s about it

Great pics by the way!

Martin


(saluk) #3

Hey, what’s up man? Ever finish any of your games? Still working on DD? What’s going on?

Looks like you put quite a bit of work into those pics. Nice seeing you dude.


(blengine_ol) #4

hey saluk! hows it goin dude? DD is just about finished, just gotta make some endings…huff… yeah i put alot of work into dem pics, but im happy with my outcome… u havent been online lately? i just started a new project for the settings…old city ruins…should be fun =)…so whatcha working on now?


(theeth) #5

thanks to Blengine for pointing out (by PM) that I missed one of the pic (http://spevack.net/blengine/simiun.html)

This one is, in my oppinion, the best of the three, since the skin has just enough spec highlight, the leather look just enough soft. The metal might have a weird reflection, but I guess that’s because you are reusing envmaps.

again, good job!

Martin


(pofo) #6

My version of Netscape dislikes your links,
Closes when I try them :-?


(valarking) #7

YOU ARE MASTA???


(blengine_ol) #8

“”“YOU ARE MASTA???”""

ya… if blender.nl was still up, id point u to the masta death post, which u might have missed =)

“”"“My version of Netscape dislikes your links,
Closes when I try them”""

did u try copy n paste? dragging? hmmm, maybe…hmm… =O


(blengine_ol) #9

if those links arent working… heres the direct link to the pics:

http://spevack.net/blengine/jolen.html
http://spevack.net/blengine/shilia2.html
http://spevack.net/blengine/simiun.html

n i fixed some stuff on the death scene, mainly more blood… if u get a spike through the bicep, i dont think itll be as clean as i once had it, poor guy =(


(malefico) #10

Not bad at all. The characters are lookijng good.
One thing though, the metal spears are too shiny, I’d like to see some dirt or rust on them.

Keep it up.

malefico.


(dickie) #11

awesome stuff!

maybe a little more expression?
some ARRRRRGHHHHHH-ness?

:slight_smile:


(S68) #12

Cool images, I like them.

May I object to something?

1 - simiun. Nice guy, but skin is very rubbery, and metal far too shiny. If that are ‘dark ages’ they haven’t got chrome! And silver tans so quickly…

I like the belt, really.

2 - shilia. Skin is far better bracelet is really nice, but belts are floating above her hips!!!

Spear is too futuristic, are you designing new dark ages after an apocalypse? What is the semitransparent thing behind her? If it is her veil it looks too much well ‘solid’

3 - Jolen. Really awesome, This skin I do like. Again ring is too shiny, but this is the only point here.

Keep them up, tell us the whole tale.

Stefano


(blengine_ol) #13

are snake skins rubbery? thats the look i was going for…anythingthing with scales is bound to look rubbery right? unless its a weight scale…

""2 - shilia. Skin is far better bracelet is really nice, but belts are floating above her hips!!! “”

lol just oine side…maybe the others parts are tight so that ones got no where to go but float?

""Spear is too futuristic, are you designing new dark ages after an apocalypse? What is the semitransparent thing behind her? If it is her veil it looks too much well ‘solid’ “”

dude u nailed it head on…it IS post apocalyptic… =) ya, i have too mch shadowing on the cloth… ill throw some emit in and brighten it up, more trans too i guess

for the crucifixtion scene others mentioned… ever seen sweat on scaly skin? looks plastic…did u ever NOT sweat when your being crucified in the hot sun =)
and he lacks expression cause as the caption reads “after hours of pain, he sees hope and prepares to die”… i dont think hes got much energy to do anything after hours of screaming he already did… but, i guess i could make a JUST GOT NAILED scene on the ground and make some expression… thanks for all yer comments