Very nice. As for hints though, it’s a 17 second intro with text and the attention span of many recruiters (if you are looking for work) I’ve been told is 5-15 seconds to grab their attention. Often they wont watch to the end if they aren’t grabbed.
I would personally put the vehicle first, guitar second for this reason. The vehicle is amazing btw, I think it was my background for a while.
One more thing, “Lym Story Character” seems to be the best ‘presented.’ Smooth rotations, easy to see. The guitar spins quickly a few times instead of slowly once. Would it be better to have it ‘upright’ and no ground plane perhaps? The vehicle it is nice that you show multiple angles to show off the hard work you have put in, but three or four angles max with smoother slightly longer camera pans would let the viewer soak in the detail more than simply more angles I think.
If this is a personal thing and not really for jobhunting, take what advice you like. It’s good work, just trying to help you with the presentation like people on the forums have helped me previously with this sort of thing.