dos palabras

a simple scene that i might use in a short film my spanish class is doing.

CC welcome.

Interesting…but too dark, could tell that was a sword at first!
Tell me, what is that box thing? and what are the ‘2 words’?

dos palabras is the name of the story we’re acting out. The box thing is the book with the titile on it. maybe it shows up better on my comp.

I’ll work on tweaking that one. Meanwhile, here’s another render.

Interesting idea, and certainly detailed. But watch out, in the first shot, for “floating objects.” You need to make sure that the background is visible and that each object is separated from that background, so that the 3D illusion is preserved. Remember to experiment with colors; for example, fill-lights work well in blue.