Double-tracked heavy tank, I need modeling feedback.

Hi I would like to have some feedback on the heavy tank. I have started improving the artillery tank, and the light tank is a tutorial tank. So does anyone have any tips form improvements that would make the tank right look better?

You just need to separate the turret form the hull so it can rotate and that will be cool.

Here’s one I did a while ago for one of my games:

Here’s the thing with cartoon style 3D virtual stuff, their not very detailed at all. (Most of the time) try adding some handles, and vents in the back for the engine, and a door at the top for entrance. Try even looking at a real tank and translate it into this cartoon style and you should get finer results. Just remember, only subdivide when you need to, smoothening and cutting areas on your own will let you be very specific.