The part 01 of a short animation, all made in blender, whit a custom toon material. A mercenary invading a orc fortress, on a suicide mission. (please, forgive my bad english im brazilian =P)
The animation seems to be okay, however, I think my main concern would be with the actual textures. In a weird way, I understand that you were going for a dark atmosphere, but there’s something about the lighting setup and the textures that makes it feel off. That’s my main concern about this.