Eglon the Frog

I’ve begun work on a character that I’ve had in my mind for a while, he’s still under construction. I’ve decided to post him here for some suggestions and pointers by those of you who are more experienced than I am.

Let me know what you think or if you have any suggestions.

Thanks!

Harnak

Front
http://home.comcast.net/~scott.benjamin/files/Front.jpg

Left Side
http://home.comcast.net/~scott.benjamin/files/LeftSide.jpg

Back
http://home.comcast.net/~scott.benjamin/files/Back.jpg

Right Side
http://home.comcast.net/~scott.benjamin/files/RightSide.jpg

What you have so far is nice, but we need to see more if we are to critique it.

That’s my next stage. Now for the body, arms , hands, legs, feet.

Thanks.

Harnak

I think it looks good so far. The eyeballs seem to extrude a little in stead of being round though, as if his eyelids are squashing them? Perhaps its my aspect of my monitor :slight_smile:

keep going!

I think it’s because the clear bit (cornea?) is very transparent. I’d make change the alpha a bit and increase the SpTr a bit.

Looking forward to seeing the rest of him :slight_smile:

I’ve been working on an animation for a moment know
and my character “Molly” is a frog too,
http://marief.soler.free.fr/Monsite/images/fond/Molly.jpg
see my site :
http://marief.soler.free.fr/Monsite/gall5.htm
Fmurr :stuck_out_tongue:

…people need to stop posting their works in other peoples’ posts…

:expressionless:
hi Jeeves,
OK…It seems I’m a bad bad newbie !
:frowning:
So
Dear Harnak,
I do apologize for having polluted your post
i did not want to hurt you in any way.
just wanted to give some idea and encourage you
to go on your way.
please forgive me and forget it.

Sometimes i forget this sentence :
P.S: Behave with others like you want them to behave with you.

A+Fmurr

Your frog is fine and has is own style
just miss the mouth…
a frog worthy of the name need a mouth, don’t you think so ?
:wink:
sincerely hope to see further shots of your frog .

Regards