Elf

Artwork Works in Progress
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I made an elf or something like that.

C&C appriciated.

Cheers, zlack

http://kibosh.net/elf.jpg

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it’s kinda hard to make out details because of the light scheme youre using. Could you post a pic with better lights?

Seems low poly, am I right?

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Sure, here it is. (Still hard to make decent lights)

And i dunno what a poly is so i just put a pic of the mesh as well :slight_smile:

Cheers, zlack

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Elves are long in the face. I’d say that’s a hobgoblin.
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I would maybe use the knife tool to cut another row of faces just around the intersection of the upper and lower lip, and then take the center vertices and pull them slightly backward.

5

looks much better now. I actually like this model, it’s a Irish pixie, looks wicked enough.

Do the lip thing Modron suggested, then his mouth will be much better looking and change the eye texture. Also the ears need small tweaking, the start point of ears comes too far from the head itself.

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Thanks Modron!

What should i change about the eye texture? I know i messed the eyes up allot, and i tried to fix it but i can’t manage it, unless i break up the whole mess (what i don’t want to do).

Should the ears be closer to the head or ?

About the pixie / hobgoblin thing, i think this is an ancestor of them both :wink:

Thanks for the comments!

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You said it. Pull ears closer to the head. :smiley:

They eyes doesn’t fit on the character IMO. Green eyes would be more fitting I think.

8

Little update again.
Changed the eye color. Gave the mouth a light color.
Changed the ears (a bit)

C&C appriciated :slight_smile:

Zlack

http://kibosh.net/elf2.jpg

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The eyes look much better now, more suitable to character. Do the edge loop cut on his touhg. Now his lips are just disapering into the head. And take the ears in little bit more.

10

nice, but his face looks really streched like…

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…like what?

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Thanks. But what is a touhg?
The ears are a dissaster (just like the eyes) I’m afraid if i’ll touch them i will mess everything up. But i’ll try.
Should the lips be more out ?

Stretched? What do you mean?

Thanks for your comments

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well, it looks like somebody is like pulling the skin back, tight around his skull, i mean its very cool, but sorta odd

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lol, thanks. anyway to fix it? or is it cool the way it is?

odd can be good btw :slight_smile:

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yes, it is cool, i think its just the tight eyes that make it look thata way

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I like it, has a great gothic look to it.

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Thanks. But what is a touhg?
The ears are a dissaster (just like the eyes) I’m afraid if i’ll touch them i will mess everything up. But i’ll try.
Should the lips be more out ?

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Ah… sorry. i’ve must ment to spell upper lip, but I must have been tired. :smiley: