Hope you guys like my work.
The concept is good, but somethings are “off” about the image. The perspective on the bottle looks almost orthographic, and the ashtray looks ungrounded (not floating exactly, but not grounded either). The whole image colours look a little washed out to me, but maybe you were going for that?
I’d say it’s the start of the end of a good render.
Really happy to read your critics. Thanks!
Everything that helps me to build awesome renders are welcome. 
Either way, I’m done with this one.
I think you can work more on the details, such as the bullets. And why a bullet shines when it is actually in the shadow?