Here is my latest render. Rendering is not my strength, so comments are welcome.
http://img272.imageshack.us/my.php?image=endofdayet7.jpg
abit more lighting wquld be awesome!but from what i can see its great!
No, I think ‘trak wrecka’ has a bit too dark a monitor. I can see everything fine, keep it that way.
…Man, I hate it when people tell me my stuff is too dark. XD
Right. So. It’s well done, just a couple things, though. First off is that it looks a little fuzzy. You might want to increase the filter quality and size (from whatever you have now to ‘cubic’ or ‘mitch’ and try setting the filter size to 1.33.) That’ll make it take a little longer, but it’ll give it much needed clarity. Also, if you can, try saving the picture as a png next time.
Anyway, the composition is nice, the modeling looks great, there aren’t any real problems with the lighting as it is. Your textures could use a bump map, though–especially with all the oblique lighting going on–to bring up texture and surface roughness.
Hey, so. This is a fine image as it is, I look forward to seeing your next version.
I couldn’t save as a .png because my file size was too large. I did increase the filtering to 1.4. This was intended as the base image for my yearly Christmas cards, thats why the lights are added.
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Cool, it reminds me of the little town in “Cars”.
Looks really cool! Try and give more rougness to the building though.
It’s all good, I like it. :] A tip though, if you meant to make the fire-truck the focus of the scene, the brightly lit, large-volume lit lamp-post really draws the eye away and makes the picture feel a little off and unfinished.
great work. Something just doesnt make it look right, however i cant point it out, ill come back when it comes to my mind.