entrance to my name

Artwork Animations
1

hey guys any idea what can i do to better this and make it more realistic? What do you rate this. 1=bad 2=alright 3=good
its just a entrance to my name.
http://vimeo.com/2109922

2

I’d say it’s allright but it’s not good or anything like that.
I think you should look at some reference videos (for example. introduction videos of other companies) and see what they do.

3

The fade in at the beginning doesn’t look great, you might want to play with that a little bit. Try adding a little movement to the text (IE have your name very slowly moving towards the camera throughout the animation). I would definately speed up the explosion modifier at the end. Maybe keep the explosion to finishing within the course of 1 second. I would fade out the spotlights when the name explodes too.

I’d give it a 1.5 right now. Good sound effects and I like the camera flashes.

4

It was quite boring. I liked the voice and sounds.

5

you should see the intro to my name huh.