Fairness [School Project]

I used blender to make an advertisement for Fairness. here it is.

http://www.openworldfilm.com/Forums/download/file.php?id=296

(sorry kinda a big file, didnt have time to upload it to a different server)

well as you can see, it is not that great… yet I’m not sure how to improve it!

I also want to know how I can incorporate AIDA (Attract, Interest, Desire, Action) into this. I already have Attract and Interest.

So I’m here to ask for C/C and other ideas!