Hi I recently made this render and I would like some different people to take a loo, and tell me about what could be improved, small things I may have missed and composition.
it is a visual representation of the song Black Hole Sun by Soundgarden
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Hi, I like the gradients you have in your picture.
Trees and mountains in fog are quite cartoon with good silhouettes, which I like a lot.
Foreground is too noisy : it should be much more simple.
You already have some shadows in the grass; you should have them more contrasted and clean. Maybe add som fake shadows so they can lead the eyes to the trees and sun.
Hope this can help !
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I not continuing with it for the time being, my computer failed and I lots a lot of progress, and I’ve got to work on my short film. Thanks for the help though.