Female Body(Warning Nudity)(Update 10-28 page 3)

Yeah, it’s tough getting the right shape. It’s unbelievable how fine the line is between beautiful and ugly.

Thanks for the settings, I adjusted some bits like the specular colour - I think that’s the colour of the shiny highlights so I made it slightly lighter than the skin colour instead of blueish, darkened the skin and softened the specularity. It’s looking much better than I had it - it was a bit clay-like before. I think the emit value made a huge difference - it gives an effect a little like subsurface scattering.

Sorry but I have to update. My work got lost due to a recent unexpected format. So I recently started working on this model.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v334/isaacf82/new.jpg

Any C&C is welcome

it’s very good! now put some hair on that babe! :wink:

that’s very good. body shapes are well defined and mostly correct

However watch your proportions. Torso is quite too small for the legs. upper legs are too small for the lower parts, hands and forearm seems to be a little too flat.

head seems a bit too big and round for this neck too.

you know, if you make the breasts larger, I’m sure no one would even look at the legs anymore…lol. Add some distraction to her to take from the legs :wink:

kidding… but I like the model; it looks great. You should probably make the thighs slightly smaller but keep the hips as large as they are.

Hehe thanks for all the comments. I will have an update soon. Im working on all of the sugestions

Here is another update. Before anybody points it out the back needs a lot of work as do the arms and legs. Any help on improving this areas is welcome.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v334/isaacf82/full.jpg

Like always C&C is welcomw

she has a perfect ass…ahem…I mean…3D modellingly speaking…er… gonna go now. :expressionless:

It looks really good, wow.
The only suggestion I can make is : try to improve her ankles, there should be a little bump where the bone is.

Hey thanks for the comments. Here is a small update.
I started work on the arms, but im stuck. I also made the legs a bit longer :wink: I like long legs %|
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v334/isaacf82/new2.jpg

C&C :Z

looks very nice
i think if you have the legs so long you might also want to make the neck longer too, just to even proportions out

Her head looks sort of “infant-esque” if that makes sense. Very babyish. I think its because its so round. The problem I see is that there is no expression in the facial features. Its so blank that its hard to see the quality of the modeling. Its clear that the angle of her nose to her face is far too sharp. The line is like a sharp crease that runs perfectly straight up the side of her nose and I think its distracting. Also, the corners of the mouth seem too pointed to me, and the mouth does not wrap around the face at all, but rather looks a bit flatly attached to the head. I hope this helps somehow. The body is very good however. (Its funny how men can model a body better than a face…)

Wu: I’ll see if I can make the neck a little longer but it looks wierd :-?

Desoto: As men we tend to look a other things in women.

Thanks for al the critics.
Heres a small update
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v334/isaacf82/face.jpg

C&C is welcome

:o falls into an uncanny valley

WAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!

-Raseri

Whoa. The irises in her eyes look a bit intense… kind of like the metal behind the light bulb in a flashlight. Though it’s effective for knocking a person over, it kind of distracts one from the beauty of the rest of the picture.

Anyway, looks amazing. Great job.

I suppose something that would help would be eyebrows and wrinkles. She’s missing both but it could be added with textures.

paroneayea: Did a quick level correction in PS

Desoto: Thats the next step but I want to get the modeling done first

Here’s another update
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v334/isaacf82/new3.jpg

Nice! :o …the nipples look a bit too symetrical but then again maybe your going for that look ,and the shoulders look odd maybe should be a bit wider… :wink: