Fightergirl (no clothes yet)

Artwork Focused Critiques
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This is my first attempt at making a whole human character. I have tested a bit with heads and faces before, but nothing serious. This girl appears in a picture by Michael Dashow, which he posted on cgtalk a few days ago. I hope he doesn’t mind me using his character this way.

If you want to see the wip until now, I have a thread at Sweblend: http://sweblend.se/forum/viewtopic.php?id=831

http://uploaded.joskar.com/lucidor/fightergirl.hands.jpg

A couple of facial expression tests:
http://uploaded.joskar.com/lucidor/fightergirl.seductive.jpg
http://uploaded.joskar.com/lucidor/fightergirl.wink.jpg
(She doesn’t have any teeth yet, so a paper will have to do as a placeholder :^)

Finally a wire of the head:
http://uploaded.joskar.com/lucidor/fightergirl.wire_thumb.jpg

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Thank you for your approval so far. :^j There were a few proportion errors to correct though.

http://uploaded.joskar.com/lucidor/comparison.jpg

http://uploaded.joskar.com/lucidor/fightergirl.body.jpg
http://uploaded.joskar.com/lucidor/fightergirl.body1.jpg

Time to fix the backside.

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Nice Character!!

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If you are going for realistic proportions, I think the head is still a bit too large.

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She looks great. I am doing a character modeling myself. I think its a good looking model.

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Thanks for the replies! :^)

You are right that the head still is too large here. I fixed it already. And yesterday I got a new computer so that I can continue adding verts to this project. Hopefully there will be an update next week or so.

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Yep she looks great, nice work :slight_smile:

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could u please provide the file? I want to try my hand at modeling the body urs would make great reference

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she looks like my music teacher…scary!!..but i love your model =)

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Sorry lipton, I don’t want to share her before I consider her finished. You’ll learn more by doing it yourself anyway, and if you have any questions I’ll do my best to answer them.