tell me what u think.
No offence, but this one’s better - http://blenderchar.weirdhat.com/eyetute/
You could improve yours with more pictures describing what to do, at the moment there is too much text which isn’t really that easy to follow. With pictures you can just look and see what you need to do rather than read it.
Did you search for a similar tute before you wrote that one, because the Blenderchar one isn’t exactly hard to find.