first animation for my company

simple but effective tool in my quest for world domination

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zbm59xBckSA

Sooo… Where’s the Mascots?

Yeah sorry but I have to get good at this first. Next step a monster…

There is no depth to it. The first part dropping = good. The words dropping don’t feel like they are part of the 3d world you created. they look more like just text overlaid in a video editor.

true thanks

You need particles when the first one hits the floor.

true again I’M TRYING!!!

Don’t get upset, it’s only constructive criticism.

I like the bam but i think you need to change the font for the rest of the text.

The ‘BAM’ is simply our logo modelled. I consciously decided to use 2 other fonts for the other two text sets. The ‘BAM Mascots, Inc.’ was made in a regal looking shiny font to fool the viewer into thinking (after it swept up above the logo) that that was the end of the animation. Then the longer pause, thicker darker authoritative font with smoke…the whole thing is meant to introduce promotional videos on our website etc. The point about not looking like part of the first attributes is well taken

Great work.
I like it as it is…

It is a good start but you need to just need to work more on how to display your work and how to hit the video!
anyways good work

Man I gotta say some of the art I see around here is awe inspiring
Blender is incredible and it’s free I have to donate right now